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Fading by ~yoriku:iconyoriku:



Walking along with time
Passing by your window
I look past the glass
See the smile fading fast

I just left your house
I stepped out of the door
A hug before we parted
My happiness fading fast

I'd hurt you, I'd hurt me
I had left pain in everything
I don't know what to do
Your love, faded, gone

Now, a year later, and I see
I know what I'd done to you
I feel what I had lost
Now, it's time that fades

I hope for the future
I want it all back again
I can't make that mistake
Your trust in me, faded

I found the truth, hidden
Lost in my heart, found again
It's there, it's not left
My love for you, not fading

Now, I stand before your door
Waiting in the rain for you
I've lost you once before
As much as time fades...

I'm not losing you again
©2005-2008 ~yoriku
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That sensation that you have when you know that you've lost someone important. You don't know what to do, or how to go about it to get him/her back. You know that the person has every right to be mad, upset, disappointed, etc in you, and yet, you still hope for more. Knowing this is what you want, waiting to the end of time is not even the worst choice to make, for life, and love go on. Maybe she'll understand this, maybe she won't. But, she will at least see it.

To those who know what it's like, to make that big mistake, and wish to be able to go back and erase it.

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@limetastic:iconlimetastic: Jan 23, 2005, 8:56:34 PM
Beautiful.. I'm feeling kind of the same right now. Cheer up, Love.

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~yoriku:iconyoriku: Jan 23, 2005, 9:04:54 PM
Thanks! And uhh... Why are you feeling the same? Anyways yea... I'll be fine again. =/
@limetastic:iconlimetastic: Jan 24, 2005, 11:09:53 AM
Don't worry about it, hun. Um, yeah. Feel bettar.

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~MochaNotCoffee:iconMochaNotCoffee: Jan 24, 2005, 4:21:10 PM
very nice hehe *hug* :heart: I love the feeling in this
~yoriku:iconyoriku: Jan 24, 2005, 6:40:02 PM
Thanks. And what feeling do you get from this? :p
*leolekia:iconleolekia: Jan 27, 2005, 5:17:55 PM
nice work. the fading imagery is very nice. there are a few rough spots, read it over out loud. though the feeling is really strong. good luck.

~Leo

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